I was moved by how terrified she was of him, but also by how ready she was to believe in him after he told her about the other Lois from the other dimension.
I think you have a wonderful way of describing how Clark affects this Lois. Eleven years of hiding has made Lois so paranoid, but she and Clark have a connection that breaks down all her walls.
I loved how Lois injured her finger by poking it into his chest, and how you showed us how her finger gave her trouble in the rest of this part. For example, she wouldn't shake hands with Clark, and he felt all guilty, even though it wasn't his fault that Lois had accusingly poked him in the chest!
Ann
