Good story so far. I like seeing Lois and Clark from another point of view. And Lucy had quite a few experiences we didn't see in the previous story, so there's a deep well still untapped.
My favorite quote so far was Lucy telling Clark about this guy she'd seen.
"His name is Jaxon and he's a computer whiz."
"Really?"
"Yeah. I mean, he has a modem and everything."
"Wow. I have no idea what that is, but..."
A modem and everything! This kid is really uptown!
We often forget how recently the online world came into existence. I can delve into the dim recesses of my memory and recall accessing a writer's bulletin board on Texas back in the 80's. I had a 1200-baud modem in my 80286 machine, and downloading anything more complex than a plain text file was just out of the question. This was back in the days of Compuserve (which I read about but never used) and AOL (which I did use but never liked) and vague promises of home computers interconnecting with other machines to share data and
even pictures! It's little touches like this one that help make this story more interesting and bring the characters to life for the reader. Kudos from me!
