Hi!
So, what does it take for you to make this into a longer story with a build up and a finish. You know, over on the other side?
Well....I suppose that I might be able to finish it else where....
I want to know the backstory. What caused him to do this and how did she catch him.
Okay so the story needs flushed out in both directions?
Man...maybe I should make it longer...but that would be so hard...well I will take it on...maybe...
