Hi,
Great start.
But was it worth all this pain, all this torture, all this shame?
She took a sip of coffee. <Maybe,> she thought. <After all, nobody knows. And nobody will ever do.>

What happen to her?
<<Did you forget what you felt when you first saw him?>>
She shook her head. No, of course she hadn’t forgot. She had never felt like this before. At least, not so intensely.
<<So why are you making it hard to yourself?>>
She sighed again. Maybe the voice was right, after all. Maybe she should just try stopping controlling herself like this.
<What must happen, happens.>
She just had to act natural from now on, and see what it resulted in.
<Yes… But what’s natural?>
She shook her head. No thoughts like this were needed now! Natural would just be the way she’d naturally react. Whichever this way was.

She acting like 14 year old girl.
More soon, please.
MAF
