I, too, liked this part. I loved how you described Clark's efforts at the strength test attraction, and how Lois noted his dislike of the Superman dolls. You created a lovely good feeling between Lois and Clark after Lois had accepted her Bugs Bunny. And it was so much fun to hear Clark talk about his 'wedding' to Rachel!
And Lois's new reminscence about Chad was beautifully written again.
Then the story turned very A-plotty, and I'm never really enthusiastic about that. I'm weird that way. But I'm certainly looking forward to the next part anyway.
Ann
