This story is totally addictive, especially when we see Lois and Clark interacting together.
Hmm.... honeymoon eh?
If Clark is prone to floating in his sleep... is he also prone to acting out his dreams?
I am intrigued by Clark... he's starting to see Lois where Lana was... I wonder how this will play with him. I wonder whether he is going through an internal struggle to justify that he loves Lana when it is becoming obvious that he really is attracted to Lois. Imagining Lois on their honeymoon.. that's a big leap from the Clark we saw a few chapters back...
Lois is entirely as expected though... she knows she is attracted to Clark, but she's in denial... she has her career to think about *chuckle*... will that be turned on it's head with a bit of a baby problem in a few chapters time?
Lana... yeah.... well... she deserved what Lois did... I would have done that too... ME-OW! But I feel like there is going to be a lot of pain and suffering once Lois and Clark get back to Metropolis.
I wonder how the extended period of time in the cabin will affect Lois and Clarks not entirely plutonic relationship.
As I said before... I'm addicted, and really looking forward to more. I also have to say... I wasn't sure how the mixed first person perspectives would work as I've seen first persons around here fall quite flat... but the way you write this is entirely endearing... and pulls us completely into both Lois and Clarks minds. It's really well done Carol.. I love it.
Thanks for giving us so much to read in such a short time... I feel spoilt!! (And am I greedy for saying I can't get enough). My only disappointment is when I find I am at the end of the part....
