I’m glad that the flashbacks didn’t seem to lose everyone. When I was laying out the story I had to face the fact that there was this big gap of time with very little that was critical to what I wanted to say. I was hoping that this technique would allow me to bridge that time.
Ann: I almost felt guilty about Lois and the powers but I have always enjoyed Ultra Woman. It also allowed me my “action/emotion” moment. As for exactly where those powers came from… well, we’re almost there.
Lieta: Again, I’m glad the flashbacks worked. I’m not sure that I have the heart to have “blown up” Lois and left it there until the next update. Maybe next time…
Michael: I need to consider a revision to one of the earlier chapters. The low-energy field that Lois can share with Clark isn’t capable of doing anything “power” related. After reading your comment about Clark possibly helping that way, I want to make that more clear.
Bob