I have been following this from the beginning, and have been shamefully remiss about providing feedback. So sorry! I can only imagine how much work you're putting into it, and really hadn't meant to take it for granted.
So, my feedback is: I thought The Forgotten was one of the most powerful fanfics I've ever read. Heartbreakingly beautiful. I was absolutely thrilled when you started a sequel, and so far the sequel easily meets the (very high) standard that you set with the first story.
Great job!