Hi Carol,
I'm sorry I've missed posting fdk on the last parts of your story, but I got very behind and have just managed to catch up.
Carol, I think you're A-plot is great ... but that's from someone who loves A-plots. Mind you, I'm particularly fond of A-plots which separate Lois from Joe and Clark from Lana.
I really love how Clark jumped in without checking the water level to protect Lois.
Is a shotgun wedding on the cards next? There's a whole plane load of guns nearby.
Can't wait for your next post, and hopefully, I'll have time to leave fdk.
Yours Jenni
