Wow! A lot happening besides just the angst of Clark wanting to tell Lana his secret but his subconscious preventing him. I'm so, so glad that you obviated the possibility of a Clark+Lana marriage, at least for now.
Gosh, how will Lois and Clark ever realize that they're destined for each other? (hint, hint) How are they going to do with this *arranged* marriage? How will the fake marriage turn real (not that the marriage is fake, really, all the i's are dotted and all the t's are crossed, as you've said, but you know what I mean.)
And what about the crazy dictator? Is he going to be totally obsessed, a la Lex Luthor on pheromone spray? What evil thing can he do now that Lois and Clark are out of Latislan? Are they going to end up back in Latislan? Or will he send some sort of team after them? You've got me obsessing about what the evil crazy dictator is obsessing about.
And, of course, what about the baby? Could it be Clark's? (I sure hope so, but you've left enough doubt to keep us on the edge of our toes.) Will there be anything odd about the pregnancy?
And, is Clark going to get to the point where he either wants to, or has to tell Lois his secret? Or demonstrate his powers in her view? The possibility of the big revelation is keeping me alert as well. If it happens, I hope it's not till they've come to some sort of rapprochement about the marriage.
But wait! How far along will they be in their marriage if/when Lois finds out? One just knows that circumstances (cough, cough) are going to fall out so that Lois and Clark must spend the maximum of time together, and you know what Mark Twain said: "Familiarity breeds contempt. And children."
By the way, one thing that keeps on nagging at me. In the show, weren't the two warring countries Latislan and Podansk? When you write Gadansk, I keep on thinking of Gdansk, a Polish port city.
