Wow, I'm not even sure what to say here. You threw down numerous game-changers and just kept 'em coming.
I managed to get you two an apartment on campus.
I know both Clark and I were struck speechless at that one. And then...
She shook her head. "No. The way the law reads now, the husband is only the biological father regardless of any other challenges if the marriage lasts at least five years after the child is born."
Navance! Who's to say he won't keep changing things until he gets his way. I'm with Clark from previous chapters--this evil maniac dictator scares me.
Carol, you are quite adept at continuously ratcheting up the temperature. I don't know just who is getting boiled here: Kermit, the readers, or the characters. Did I already say 'wow'?
I do feel sad for Clark and what he has to go through--the letting go of Lana et al. but at the same time I enjoy how sticky everything keeps getting. I'm excited for the next part(s)!
~s
