Wait... just how many grandmothers does Clark have? 3 - Kent, Davis and Nana? Either I must have misunderstood or it's becoming clearer there was a Christopher Davis in the Kents' past..? Verrry interesting.
You know Clark seems to be the only one in his family to prefer Lana over Lois
He's one very messed up guy. Even after his "it's my baby" speech to Lana, it seems as if he still holds out hope for a future together with Lana.
I guess one can't expect Clark to just turn off his feelings which are almost as old as he is but it's still irritating and that just goes on to show your terrific character believability (is that a word??)!
And Lois.It's very hard for Lois to believe Clark when he says he isn't seeing Lana anymore, yeah? (This must be the third or fourth time when he had to reiterate that he won't cheat on her). I hope Clark realizes that Lois' lack of faith in him is mostly his doing and his inability to spend time with her...
And the grand moment is about to arrive... he won't chicken out at the last moment, right? I can just picture the lunkheaded part of him thinking it might be too much stress for Lois with the baby and all... let's wait until after the baby is born. :p
Hmm, I didn't catch it immediately but are Lois and Clark also Lana's ride back to Metropolis? Uh oh...
Loving this story immensely... and the title to your sequel (in the NaNo thread) is making me speculate all sorts of things for where this story might end.. although we still have a looooooong exciting journey ahead, yeah?
