Carol, I thought things would get better now that you're posting regularly. But no. You mentioned somewhere that readers might have negative feelings towards you the same way as they have towards Clark. Well, now you did it. Bad Carol, Bad
I don't think Jimmy's actions were uncalled for. Not that Sam deserved it and I sure cheered him on to use Clark as a bunching bag but in the end, Jimmy needs to hate somebody and he hasn't met you, so he needs to punch somebody else
Killing Dave was still mean you know. Not that I mind, really. He is just fictional and I never got to bond with him and because of him we got the final scene.
Can you say OMG? Lois is wearing a naughty (shamelessly stole that from Manda) and nothing else and thus is practically naked in front of her HUSBAND and he's coming in and finally notices that Lois is a woman. Took him a few minutes but still. I mean WOW.
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Imagine the guy to the left with Clark's face and the guy to the right with Lois' face.
And finally. I did something I usually try to avoid with OTOH. But I checked the FDK-folder on my PDA and the first preview took up the whole screen and I couldn't help but notice love and then I read it. And nononono, please, stop those previews. They just hurt. (Seriously. I mean it. I'm really bad with fic-temptation. No spine at all) Now I want the rest and I can't and I want I want I want I want (imagine Clark ranting here
) So anyway, Lois finally realized and ADMITTED to herself that she's in love with Clark. I could (and did, I think) have told her this ages ago. As far back she she was driving out to Smallville. Or staking a claim on Clark. Or doing snow-angels with him. Or. or. or... And then she's actually wearing a RED naughty and Clark notices again. And she tells him to keep her warm. Can you get any more obvious?
/knocks on Clark's head
Hello, somebody home? Wife. Beautiful, loving, sexy, mother of YOUR child wife wants you to make love to HER (and not that alienophobic floozy with the peroxide-habit). Run off, buy HER lots of goods and grovel and then CRAWL into bed with her and show her that the thing in the cabin wasn't a dream.
But no, that's not what's going to happen of course. Otherwise the story would be over and you're going to torture us for another 40 parts. And we will be coming back as we're gluttons for punishment and all that...
So what WILL/COULD happen is that Clark does as she tells him too and afterward things get really bad because Clark just cheated on his mistress, err... well you know what I mean.
And before I forget, they talked. And they LISTENED!!!!
Can you imagine that? Real words that the other party actually processed. And I was just yelling at Lois in my mind that she had to open her pie-hole and tell her HUSBAND what she was expecting of him. This passive-aggressive behavior has to stop. They need to talk. And they need to take FULL advantage of the weekend away. Sam should have them stripped after sending them into the cabin. And no clothes or towels or bedsheets and stuff.
Did I mention I love this story and that it's about 18 hours till parts 68 and 69? And how about posting twice a day a single part? Please, pretty please? Double the FDK, and people won't be any happier but still. Please? Did I mention pretty please?
Michael, who just realized he babbled like Lois on drugs in here. Sorry about that
