Cute parts. I like the little added inner thoughts that show developing feelings.
I'm glad that Lois knows she is in love with Clark but ticked that Clark didn't reach that space first.
IT really seems you are mirroring some events in the tv series Smallville.
- Lana obsession
- Clark fearful of telling Lana about himeself
- Lana preganant
- Lana loses baby
- Lois and Clark as buddies at first
- Lois develops feeling for Clark
