Carol, you managed to introduce quite a few canon characters in this chapter, and in most cases, I simply thought, "Yes, that's exactly what they'd do." - be it Henderson telling Lois to get a new career or Bobby Bigmouth demanding Chinese from Clark. It's just so them that you really caught me by surprise with Bernie Klein actually being Van-El.
Of course, it makes sense, for it seems that he had helped his parents with designing and building Clark's space craft when still in his late teens. Still, you caught me unaware.
But do you know what bothers me to some extent? Lois and Clark have are on their second - or is it third? - day of work, and already they're holding out on Perry on two major stories (Van-El and about them being the couple that was in the news because of the whole Latislan stuff, not to mention their reluctance to let Christopher's name be printed as an attempted victim of the Toyman. Let's see where that goes...
Oh, by the way - did I mention you're brilliant?
