Hi,
I'd like to thank you all for your fdk and for your insightful comments.
Terry, I did let the change of POV slip by, and I can only suggest that it was because I was trying hard to finish this story by the end of the year.
Now I have not succeeded in that goal, I hope to take more time and care with the writing process.
Ann, I do confess that with a story that has taken so long to post and to write, I also have difficulty in remembering the details from the early chapters. I keep having to check back for continuity.
I'm sorry that some of you feel there hasn't been enough interaction between Clark and his daughters, but to tell the truth, this story has been more about Clark getting back to his job as a reporter and adjusting to his limited powers.
Perhaps I could write a sequel which would feature his daughters more ... but I have to finish this story first.
Thanks again for your comments,
Yours Jenni
