Okay, I ended up with more time this evening. So I went and read the next part.
This was fantastic and while I didn't particularly miss Lois in the first part, I can't deny that she added a ton to this one.
There was a lot of humor here:
Mrs. Cox had always reminded her off a cross between a high-priced hooker and an assassin.
I think Lois should tell Mrs. Cox this.
“What do you mean by "Help, Superman'? That's *my* line, you know?”
I loved this line! It both exemplifies Lois' confusion - I mean, why would she quickly understand that someone who has always been indestructible is in trouble? - and Lois' sense of proprietary over Superman. Even if it's clear she's a bit hurt by his behavior the last time she saw him.
*Superman*! Lois wants to know where you are. She will kick your caped butt if you keep silent.
No better way to let Superman know that Lois is involved!
Off to read part 3...
