Cool. Very, very, cool change-up of the Superman legend. It's a great idea, and so far, I'm really enjoying the story itself as well.
I thought Lois was having some physical attraction there, when Clark came down the stairs... and as for Clark, well, he may be keeping his own counsel.
And actually, (well, it's all been ret-conned and re-booted so many times that I don't think even DC knows what the "true" story of Clark and Lois is anymore) I have seen older comics where he was only admiring from afar, and she was almost contemptuous of Clark. And it wasn't always clear that Lois was in love with Superman, but it was clear for a long time, that he was always going to be something of a mystery man to her.
Anyway, who cares? It's fanfic. You can set up their relationship any way you want!
