Well, I guess it's time to poke my head up. I've been following the story but afraid to jump in until I could get a feel for where you were going.

I like the concept but can't help but wonder about how Lois would have been changed by her association with Lex. In part 1 Lois seemed more like Lex than the Lois I know. In parts 2 and 3 I seem to be seeing a Lois I'm recognizing.

Whether I stay smile or not [Linked Image] I like the structure and flow of what you are doing. I am looking forward to see how the trip to San Francisco goes and the meeting with Clark.

I can't wait to see the next part.

Bob