Rats! I was sorta hoping that part 6 might have materialized by the time I got home. No such luck. grumble

I love this story. I love the first person narrative, which is horribly hard to do well, but you make it look/read so effortless. I love that you're giving us an entirely new and fresh version of the characters and yet they are completely in-character. I love your sense of humor, the little nuggets of self-deprecation and snark that you've sprinkled through the story. It makes it that much easier to believe I'm actually inhabiting Lois' mind while I'm reading.

I'm also enjoying your take on Clark and the dynamic between the two of them. I love unresolved sexual tension in a story and I'm very hopeful about the direction this one is headed. laugh

So keep it up. If you need plates of brownies or your laundry folded or someone to walk the dog so you can continue writing, let me know.

Now get back to work!

Lois: You know, I have a funny feeling that you didn't tell me your biggest secret.

Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
Ides of Metropolis