Anna,
This was so nice! Being a birthday present for Jana (Happy Birthday, Jana!), it is fitting that Jack be the one who comes up with the plan.
I *loved* Clark's reaction!! He knows right away what Jack is up to. So funny as he shakes his head and wonders what Jack thought the outcome would be (they kiss? declare their undying love? LOL). And then the best part... Clark decides who is he to look a gift horse in the mouth? Go, Clark!!
You also gotta love Lois. Suspicious from the start, but ever willing to "play the fool" if it means breaking a story.
And then the touch of hands. Clark obsessing over what to do next was classic!
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. Anxiously awaiting Part 2...
- Vicki
