It is an excellent follow-up, Carol. I was impressed that the tone didn't change from part one to part two.
When I say "tone," I mean the feel of the dialogue and the descriptions, the pacing, and the attitude of the story. It's more than just the point of view and the verb tense used. Carol, you were able to duplicate the "feel" of Tank's opening segment - which was already very good but which also benefited greatly from the additions he made - and completed it seamlessly. And that's not an easy task. I salute you.
And I also salute you for the revelation. No fireworks, no huge blowup, no fight, and no quick and easy resolution. I like it that Lois accepted Clark's dual identity, and I also like it that she told him that she needed time to assimilate the two identities into one. It's what I'd expect of a healthy and mature woman.
Job well done, Tank and Carol. I think we have a new challenge team going here.
