Loved it and I love it even more that we have a two sequels to look forward to.
I think it should be much easier for future Lois to travel back in time. She knows the future, and how things turn out, so she's much more open to Clark and exploring her feelings. But, as you say, poor Clark. He's going to have a Lois who loves him completely, only for her to be taken away shortly thereafter.
Can't wait for next week. One point for suggestion, in part 8, I would add a bit more spaces in between your paragraphs. It might make for an easier read.
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