Yes, Bob may be right, this may not be done in 5 parts, even if they are a little longer. It keeps growing on me as I write.
I have to say up front that I am not as comfortable with this story as I was with the first two. I started out to basically play a joke on Lois in Foreshadowing and I ended up with 4 people in a very confusing and difficult situation. Especially poor young Lois who has had the least experience and/or time to get used to all this time-travel stuff. She's really been thrown into the deep end. And she's got this huge tension between how she used to think of Clark Kent and what she's seen in the last day. She can't keep thinking of him as her hack of a loser colleague, but how sudden a transition can she really make in her own mind? Thinking out loud here.
