This was indeed a fun story. I think my favorite part was snarky Jonathan, a character we don't often get to see. And the "ice storm of '85" explanation of his expanded vocabulary was inspired!

Do work on the next one in the series! You have a terrific touch with these characters and I'm ready for some more Carol-fic.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing