Nice tale thus far.
didn’t want to ruin the surprise by making it obvious from the start where the story was heading,
That line makes me want to stop reading right now. Running into bits of TOGOM didn't faze me as I figured if Lois is not talking to Clark and Lucy is taking up his evenings that Clark would not be Lois's escort to the nightclub and thus would not get shot.
But that line seems to say this will go down that oft treaded path.
He didn’t even hear her when she finished her sentence by whispering: “Superman.”
So Lucy knows? Reminds me of Tank's
"That Blind Sister Of Mine"
