Well, you've figured out how to hang ten at the cliffs. This was one of the better "reader incentives" I've ever read. And it's a pretty interesting twist on the episode, too.

But if there were two bodies on the floor, why wasn't the Planet's newsroom cordoned off by the police as a crime scene? Could the police have finished all their work in such a short time? Apparently that was the reason they kept Lois at the precinct for so long, to try to make sure she had nothing to do with the deaths, but now Perry's going to wonder if Superman didn't have something to do with the dead men.

Ooh! Martha's suggesting that Clark tell Lois The Secret! And Jonathan seems to agree! Also very interesting. Will Clark's eyesight ever return? If not, will he get a canine guide and name it Krypto? If Clark doesn't spill the beans, when will Lois figure it out? Will Clark get a disability pension?

I wonder if Clark's heat vision still works. He obviously can't use his other vision powers, but the heat? Maybe that's how he'll regain his sight. Crazier things have happened!

Neat story! Next chapter is when?


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