Oh, Sara, that was beautiful! OK, I know everyone says it's too short, but I think you left off at a perfect place. Definitely makes us want to see what happens next!
Can I make a suggestion? Just so it sounds more like Clark (or should I say, more like an American), I would suggest changing "metres" to "yards", and also changing "Puss" to "kitty" (or "kitten").
Other than that, I wouldn't change a thing - that was just perfect!!
- Vicki
