Framework4:
Thank you. For a while I wasn’t sure I’d get the story going in the direction I wanted.

Terry:
As for your comments, I think I’ll invite you to look at the final part.

Vicki:
Yes. Clark did do okay. But only because he got out of the way and let the women talk. Thanks again for spotting the phone slip.

C-Mom
I would have liked to see something like this. But, oh well. I’m glad you like it so far.

Michael:
Wow. Big FDK! I’m glad some of the humor worked. The only time I seem to be able to achieve funny is when I bring in Lucy.
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Now I don't know which is sadder, Lucy's situation or Lois'.
I think Lucy is exaggerating a bit to make a point to her big sister. (At least, I hope so.)

Artemis:
Thanks. This was far more challenging than I thought it would be. I was right to be afraid of taking the TOGOM challenge.


Thank you all for the feedback. I hope you like Part 5.

Bob