Hi Bob,
Sorry for not posting comments on the individual parts, but I did want to let you know how much I enjoyed your version of TOGOM. It was nice to see Clark tell Lois about himself rather than let her suffer, but it was also realistic that Lois would blow a gasket at first.
Thanks for giving them the emotional strength to work through the trust issues and for the happy ending. And the smoochies. I always love a good smoochie.
Oh, and just for the record, if you write an epilogue or a sequel, I would read it.