Okay, folcs, life is really nutty here, but I am reading all your lovely detailed feedback, so please know that I do appreciate it, even if I can't respond in as much detail as I'd like.
I'm glad to see that all that groundwork is paying off. I.e., that it's actually believable that this Clark would let Lois befriend him as Superman first.
Queenie: Interview first, young lady. We'll just have to see whether any da...anything else comes after that.
There are some rewrites flying back and forth between me and my betas. Friday if it's working, Saturday if I have to rewrite more. What can I say? They're high maintenance, but they're worth it.
