It was a stranger dressed in black casual slacks, a grey t-shirt that hugged his quite impressive chest, and a black leather jacket. His dark hair curled loosely around his ears and the back of his neck, one curl falling over his forehead in a way that begged to be brushed back.
This surprised me! (I'll just join the feedback club). Superman showed up as the original Clark Kent (only without the name).
Cliffy! That's a great one! You really know how to make your readers beg for more.
I'm glad I read this story AFTER writing Green-Eyed Monster, because -- HappyGirl -- I would have been too intimidated to write my Superman dates story. You set the bar up really high!
Those were just some great scenes I had to COME back and comment on. On to part 26! (You make procrastination too easy!)
