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“No, they won’t, because Clark Kent is not buying this house. Caleb Knight is. Or rather, Clark’s new Limited Liability Corporation is buying it on Caleb’s behalf. Give Lloyd a call and have him set it up. Call it…Norbert Enterprises.”
That is perfect! clap I especially love the "Norbert Enterprises." lol

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and one from Lucy wanting to know if he was really as “yummy” in person as he seemed on T.V.
Your Lucy has better taste than the show's Lucy. (Or, given that two different actresses played the part, should I say "the show's Lucys (Lucies?)"? wink )

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“I’m at work, of course. Are you telling me that you’re answering this phone while you’re…” she paused briefly to come up with the right wording for a public setting…”in uniform?
How cool! I don't think I've ever read any stories in which he had done that before.

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She only paused a beat before daring to ask, “What kind of engagement does…our mutual acquaintance have?”

“That’s not who has the engagement. It’s the Other Guy.
Oy. Three personae -- two of whom she either won't or can't refer to by name in a public place -- can make for a very confusing conversation.

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Benny Bonebreak
Hmmm... In the greater Superman universe (and, to a lesser extent, in L&C as well), people with the initials L. L. play a prominent role in Clark's life. (Lois Lane, Lex Luthor, Lana Lang and, in the greater universe, Lori Lemaris and Lyla Lerrol) I think you are starting a new tradition -- snitches have to have the initials B. B. wink

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A second voice, even fainter, could barely be made out replying, “No problem, Mr.…” before it was cut off abruptly
So close, and yet so far...

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“Well,” Lois thought as she hung up the phone, “He handled that better than I would have expected.”
And *much* better than the show's Clark did. Of course, your Clark has already had a lot of practice dealing with the public and the demands made of a celebrity.

There is so much else I am tempted to quote, but I would end up quoting practically the entire post. I think I responded to enough to let you know that I enjoyed part 10 and am looking forward to part 11.

Joy,
Lynn