Totally believable. In fact, I loved every minute of Lois trying to out-think Clark, and Clark totally calm while she figured out that she wasn't getting away from him.
Best moment for me, though? Him taking care of her while she was sick, wiping her face and neck with the cool cloth. I love them in love... so can we get Lois back there soon, ML? It's so hard to see her hurt him! He's supposed to be on his honeymoon, darn it. Speaking of which, I'm in a total waff mood right now, so I could do with some fun intimate-but-not-quite moments and Lois grabbing onto those vague memories of her and Clark together (cause you know they gotta be right there, right? Right at the edge, but she just can't quite grab onto them yet? At least, I'm hoping. I always was the sunny-side kind of girl).
I find myself a bit at a loss here with your posting schedule - I'm so used to reading your stories as a whole on the archive! How about giving us a fabulous new part to read soon? I'm going to need some reading material - apparently the mid-Atlantic is supposed to get walloped this weekend with a pretty big snowstorm... and I do love to read while I'm stuck inside. Just putting that out there.
Looking foward to part 4!
Tracey
