LOL, Can we say you planted a clue about it's origin, for those that did not recognize it, in the part? Cause if we comment directly about the clue, that will also give it away.
I did not recognise the line so Googled it
So I craved and googled it, and of course, it made perfect sense after that. What did we do before search engines?
Did I mention that I get a payment from google every time that line is googled?
who needs nfic when you can get ML's gfic-version
you do write pretty steamy g-fic.
Did I mention that if anyone ever thinks I step over the line, they should feel free to let me know? I think I know where the boundries are, but at times I think my big toe has a tendency to crowd that line. So if you ever think I've stepped over the line, please let me know.
this fic is brilliant (as is the writer)
Not so sure about the brilliant. Twisted might be a better description (of both the fic and the writer)
But what a great part! Wowzers!!! Lois's mind and heart are at war with themselves! Her heart is trying to force her to remember, forcing flashbacks to appear like geysers, forcing their way to the surface of her conscious mind, and her head - no doubt under some fiendish drug (or something) administered by Deter - is trying to repress and deny her true feelings.
What a great way to describe it! Unless... Well, maybe Lois really is in love with Deter. Did you consider that possibility?
