CC,
This was fantastic, and I apologize for just now getting a chance to reply to this. I was away from the computer for a bit, but I had printed the first three parts, as well as Lynn's "Roadtrip" and was making a point of reading it on the Greyhound Bus. I loved the story thus far, and only have one slight concern.
This being that I wasn't completely convinced Lois and Clark could so easily give each other up, after one year of marriage. While I understand that their real "true-loves" were not each other, it just seemed a bit... saddening that they wouldn't forego the belief in "true-love" and all its complexities, for the love they share. It seemed all too easy. But I imagine you have reasoning for this, to which I say, "Continue on! Don't let me stop you!" and hope for the best. One part to go, and I can't wait.
-Jo
