Wow, Elisabeth. That was well done. It was intense to see early S1 Lois discover Clark's secret and I found myself half covering my eyes while reading. Descriptions of Clark, Martha and Jonathan's reactions were well written, as was Trask's mania.
“Oh, Lois!” she muttered miserably to herself. “Do you know what you’ve lost?”
“Not as much as I have.”
“Huh?” Lois whirled to see him standing there, the Flying Man. He looked utterly miserable, so much so that she needed a mental kick to remind herself that he was just a story.
Wah! This mental image gave me lip-wibbles.
BJ
