Ditto what everyone else has said. I'm very glad to see Lois realizing what has happened to her marriage, and determined to change it.
Although staying late at the office to mull over the harmful effect that staying late at the office is having on her marriage seems a strange way to begin fixing things!
You did an excellent job of describing Lois's realization of how lonely Clark must have been during all this. And her realization that Clark's love is not easily detered. That's a start. I can't wait to see what she plans to do about it!
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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