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Beautiful!

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“Do you know how many deals I made with God, Lois? How I have begged and bargained over the months? Just bring her back. If she’s sick or injured or amnesia- stricken and will never remember me, I’ll take her. If she’s been held captive and…forced,” he faltered, cleared his throat. “Comes home with a child, two children, twenty, I’ll take her.” He turned her face towards his slowly, wanting her to see him. “Anyway, anyhow, anytime, anyplace. I just…want…her…back.”

“My biggest regret,” Lois replied. “Was that I was taken before I could tell you I loved you. That night, the night Tempus came…I would have. I didn’t think I would ever be able to say it to your face… just to your memory.”
Love this part. thumbsup

Great Nfic Epilogue. thumbsup

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Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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