Ann-- Hahaha. Love the portrayal of Jimmy as Lurch and of Henderson's wife's "cousins." Pwahaha.
I share Clark's feeling of loss. How can he get over his phobia?
It is a pickle, isn't it?
Seme--
I'm so loving this story right now.
Thanks! I'm glad.
Michael--
Now you're going completely original, which is nice btw.
Mostly original, yeah. Still some echoes from the series, though!
Maybe spider silk vests on a government contract.
Hahaha. Maybe they're manufacturing Spider-men?
PS: You accidentally got Darth Vader mixed into this in one place
LOL. Oops. It should be fixed now. My "secret" is out now--for a lot of the OC names, I mixed and matched the first and last names of Star Wars actors. Prowse obviously being one of them. :p
Amber--
Ack! You can't stop there! I mean, I'm glad you didn't leave us hanging for long after part 12, but now I just want more!
Hahaha. Guess I'll have to oblige ya!
Framework--
Thanks.
That said Your Lois Lane is very different from canon Lane. I hope you have some bits in the tale to allow us to see why she is less isolative than canon Lois.
Hmm. Well, I guess in part I think it's obvious to her Clark needs someone. But I do touch a tiny bit on Lois's past in places. Guess we'll have to wait and see if the change in character really is believable. If not, I can always make edits/additions.
I believe fanfics to be constant WIPs!
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Thank you for your replies, everyone.
