RL hasn't allowed me much time lately, but I have been lurking a bit and reading your story. I'm still enjoying the originality and the change of venue. I find the relationship between Clark and Lois fascinating and Mayson and Trask frightening.
Maybe we should slip into Lois's POV for that scene!!
Yes, please! I'm enjoying reading a story from Clark's POV (which IMHO is a rare thing), but am practically salivating to know what's going on in Lois' mind.
BJ