DW

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I can't believe that the story will end in about 9-10 parts - are you sure it can't be longer?
It will be longer. My latest estimate is 40 parts, but no matter how fast I write, the end never seems to get closer. confused

Thanks for your FDK, DW.

Sarah More to come!

Ann Thanks, Ann.

I have deliberately made Clark less sure in using his powers - sort of like a rudderless boat - because, until now, he's had no Lois.

The van scene had a couple of purposes - one was certainly to show that Lois really is *meant* to be with Clark, and he's so much better for being with her.

Cristina

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I'm not sure I'm making sense
You did make sense - and your thoughts are accurate. This trip needs to build the LnC relationship and it needs to happen quickly (timewise).

I was writing Parts 25, 26 and 27 at the same time as I posted Part 12 and some FDKers were asking for a little more B-plot. Well, you've had to wait 13+ parts, but the pendulum has definitely swung the other way. laugh

Thanks for your FDK.

Corrina.