Ooh, feedback! Precious, my precious...wait, sorry, wrong epic.
Deja Vu, we'll have to wait and see how this fight between Lois and our "mystery guest" is instigated. And I'm glad you liked the snarky and (hopefully) funny lines. Goodness knows this story needs some humor as a counter-balance.
Iolanthealias, you know more than you're telling. Thank you. Yes, Perry knows in this story. I thought it would be unreasonable for him not to know five years after Clark and Lois got married. After all, he isn't editor because he can yodel.
And while the series never mentioned what Alice did while she was waiting for Perry to come home from the Planet, several fics have featured her as an attorney, so I just thought I'd go with that. And I like strong female characters. I'm actually more comfortable writing them. Don't know why.
Mozartmaid, Wonder Woman does more than just grate on Lois. RAFO. And while it may be obvious to us that DP=WW, maybe it's not so obvious to everyone else.
Next chapter coming up!