I have to admit that I never thought that I'd really like this story. Early on I was continually unimpressed that Lois was 'only' a football journalist. I had a hard time justifying that such a thing would be 'worthy' of a Lois Lane.
All that said, I will admit that I thoroughly enjoyed the story. The backstory and how it 'motivated' Lois was solid and believable. I really enjoyed the fact that when Lois and Clark had problems they actually 'talked' to each other and worked them out.
It could be said that in this story everything rolled along much too smoothly, but sometimes that's nice to read.
Overall an excellant story, and one that I found myself eagerly awaiting the next instalment.
Also, I'd like to thank Corrina for allowing me to play with her characters in my own twisted little ficlet.
Tank (who sees the gentle readers going to want to know more about the eventual living arrangements and how Lois does as a reporter at the Planet)
