Oooh, strong start.
I actually expected Trask to kill M&J.

Glad he didn't.
Uhm, how did Clark survive the first bullet? After all, the green-K usually made him immediately vulnerable on the show.
Oh, and the consummate secret agent sounds a lot like Lois. Can't wait to finding out what you twisted to bring her onto this path. And of course, she will meet the prisoner, rescue him, etc. etc...
Can't wait for the next part. Don't mind the torture. Much better than torturing Lois.
Michael