Framework If I dropped the prologue, I would have to give that information in the story, and I really wanted to keep Trask *out* of the story. The results of his actions are crucial to the story, but he isn't.
Iolanthe and Elizabeth Thanks for your thoughts.
bellarase I've always seen Trask as having a really mean streak that makes him capable of almost anything.
Vicki Imagine Lois' shock the first time she enters the room and Clark looks up to ask, "Who are you?"
That would be very funny. It wouldn't fit in this fic, but it's still
Kathy Trask deserves retribution, but I don't think it would help the recovery of Lois and Clark. Anyway, I just wanted rid of him, so I put him under a bus.
Thanks so much for the comments, everyone.
Corrina.
