Hmm... I wonder if TMTY 2 is going to be from Clark's POV. And if one of the TMTYs is going to be named Crossroads.

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He is not human. He is an animal - a dangerous, vile, depraved animal - who knows nothing but brutality and violence.

She put a line through 'depraved', and 'brutality', and 'violence'.

She put three emphatic lines through 'animal'.
Uhm, why did she leave 'vile' in there?

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The prisoner's situation was regrettable ... but it wasn't of her making.

She would ensure that he did not escape. She would ensure that he didn't harm any human. She wouldn't allow him to be hurt unnecessarily.

But that was the extent of her responsibilities.
Considering the next paragraphs, I wonder if Lois is first going to care or if it's simple curiosity that's going to get her to watch over Clark past her father's passing.

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Yesterday, he had dropped his shorts without thought of being observed. Today, he'd tried to squeeze against the wall to be less visible. What had changed?
I wonder what he's thinking? Clark has had seven years to think. What's he going to make of the change in care? I'm guessing he assumes Trask got kicked out. Otherwise, why should he care? Or did he notice Lois through the one-way mirror and knows he's being watched by a woman?

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The prisoner had positioned himself in the beam so that the meagre late afternoon rays fell on his broad and blemished back.

He liked the sun.
That's interesting. And how's the sunlight getting into Clark's room. I know the one-way mirrors need a dark room on the other side, but does that mean he can now see Lois, too? And what will it mean for Clark to have access to sunlight. Will he revert to his basic nature of the 'vile, dangerous beast that is bent on slaughtering and enslaving billions of people'?

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She unlocked the door; Longford leant through the doorway, deposited the meal on the floor, and then pushed it with the non-Achilles end of the rod.
Now, see? That's how you feed the Kryptonian. hyper notworthy party

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