I'm absolutely hooked, the way you describe Trask, his notebooks, the hatred he shows when he describes "the alien" is how I see him. It shows who is the real vicious and inhuman individual.
And I liked the insight in Clarks world, you made clear that he may have been hurt repeatedly and they may have taken away everything he held dear, but somehow he managed to remain Clark.
In a way the lifes of Lois and Clark are very similar, both were seperated from their families, no one knew where they were, both seemed to have no one who cared for them, no one to talk to... I think both have lived a very sad and lonely life, until now. Now they have each other without knowing it yet.
I am very worried though not surprised that Moyne has a second key to the cell. It seems Moyne is cut from the same cloth as Trask, but it seems Trask preferred emotional or psychical abuse and Moyne preferred physical abuse... both relish having full power over another individual ... it is sad that Clark was in their hands for over seven years, he has lost so many time.
Great story, can't wait for another part. I haven't been online much in the last few months because RL keeps me really busy, but I hope it'll slow down soon so I can give FDK more often.
If I remember correctly:
6:00 a.m. NYC = 12:00 p.m.(noon) Berlin/Paris = 10:00 p.m. Melbourne/Sydney/Canberra
