Nail biter, indeed! I've been semi-lurking for a while since RL has been so much MORE lately, but had to comment on this part. I, too, love the way you are slowly revealing Clark's humanity to Lois. There's a nice juxtaposition going on with the revelation of first Trask's character and now Moyne's.
I also think that Lois' gut is right on and can't wait to see how Clark and Lois escape from whatever Moyne is planning. One other scenario popped into my head - that Scardino will follow-up on the Kents and then just happens to be there to take out the trash when Moyne makes his move.
I hate waiting for new parts, but can't help but keep reading unfinished stories. It's a curse.
ETA: Wow! What response time. By the time I posted, part 8 appeared.
