MozartMaid I'm glad you like the little steps forward. I needed to show how awful Clark's life was so that the little things like calling him by name made sense.
Thanks,
Framework Bakasi There are so many predjudices to overcome until our favorite couple will be able to trust each other.
Exactly. And that's why I'm probably going to need four stories!
DW True - no one is going to take Clark's word on anything - except for perhaps Lois!
Cristina I'm glad the detail isn't too much. Sometimes it's hard to know what to put in and what to leave out.
Thanks,
L Vicki It is so satisfying when a reader can see the underlying story that isn't directly stated. Thanks for reading so carefully, Vicki.
Bellarase It's always good to know that a fic continues to hold interest.
Laura Next part is up, Laura.
Kathy This chapter did a lot to clear up my misconceptions from the last on
Actually, misconceptions were everywhere.
When I read your FDK about Clark 'breaking out' I thought you meant emotionally - ie that he'd chosen to get involved in the scuffle.
My comment about you alerting me to something that needed clarification referred to something else!
I'm glad it's clearer now.
Kyla Getting rid of Moyne achieved two things - it got rid of him (duh!) and it gave Lois a chance to be alone with the prisoner. Wonder what she'll do with that chance???
Thanks for letting me know you're reading
Immery Michael He sure is hung up on the ‘beautiful’ bit.
I admit that I don't follow canon too closely, but I like the fact that when Clark Kent first sees Lois Lane, he is completely taken by her - even if she's brawling on the concrete floor of a cell!
Thanks for the cherry, Michael. Some of your comments are
- but I'm not going to say any more!
Emily I also liked the progress that Lois seems to have made with Shadbolt despite his convictions about the "alien".
Can't wait to see what Scardino has to say about the recording. He seems to want to remain detached to make his life easier but seeing the truth in technicolor will make it a lot harder to allow Moyne to continue as is.
I loved these comments because you nailed two characters - Shadbolt and Scardino. Thanks.
Thanks, everyone.
Corrina.
